Needs work overall. IV2B gave a good breakdown. Take your time, play around with photoshop or whatever you're using and learn how to maneuver around the program.

I like the concept and idea, however execution just needs the touch up. Also, don't try to take credit for anything you didn't do, not to call you out but it's not a good look. Try another edit and repost back, watch your improvement. Try to create something without using anything you used this time. Am I rambling