My steam artwork - any opinions?

**zogo3000** · 10-03-2018

https://steamcommunity.com/id/zogo3000/
&
https://steamcommunity.com/id/Z0G0

Any feedback for either would be appreciated - Thanks!

**Sam** · 10-03-2018

Really like the second one but the left side looks too thick, and the first I love but the way the lines cut through the words at the bottom doesnt work too well

**zogo3000** · 10-04-2018

Originally Posted by HeyImGay

Really like the second one but the left side looks too thick, and the first I love but the way the lines cut through the words at the bottom doesnt work too well

Alright, thanks for the feedback!
About the lines on the first one - that's just the way that the steam dividers between artworks are. Just the way the background lines up which doesn't work as well, but thanks for the feedback anyway!

**Sam** · 10-04-2018

Originally Posted by zogo3000

Alright, thanks for the feedback!
About the lines on the first one - that's just the way that the steam dividers between artworks are. Just the way the background lines up which doesn't work as well, but thanks for the feedback anyway!

One other tiny thing, with the glitchy text it should go under the left line layer rather than ontop so its like the right one

**potatopooop** · 10-04-2018

Good work bro

**Ally** · 10-06-2018

Could be better. Personally think it's too basic / common animations that are usually used.
if you need help with some assistance with artwork you can add my steam about it