My version of MPGH News

[J Miliam]

Greatgreatgreat. I honestly prefer this over the other one. Well written, don't care if some is C+P, it looks good, reads good, it's overall good. Johnny's was annoying to read, if that's the correct term to use.

[[MPGH]Liz]

the relationship between Pakistan and United States has been so great.

Hasn't *

from Pakistani army base.

from a*

The CIA teams are investigating more about who were involved.

try saying persons involved, makes more sense.

Just recently, US have

The U.S.*

day and has started to create flood in couple

days & a flood.



I would check for more but cant see first post now.

[Cal]

@Liz should i update now becuase everone is bitching about how i dont have much content.

[Heartview]

YOu hte anything i do.
Now shut the fuck up.

Never said I hate yours. I said that I like this one better.

Goodpoint. @Ian keep it original dont over color it like @Heartview said dont make it a fucking rainbow

Maybe a touch of color here and there, but Ill stand by using more formatting changes than color changes would make it much easier to read.

[Auxilium]

who the fux is this "Johnny Knoxville"

[[MPGH]Liz]

@Liz should i update now becuase everone is bitching about how i dont have much content.

/care... this one has more content but has to be better distributed and more alive. its too blank and noninteracting atm. You have to attract the reader, not just give the information.

[Insane]

/care... this one has more content but has to be better distributed and more alive. its too blank and noninteracting atm. You have to attract the reader, not just give the information.

We can't have like different news letters appearing official we need something organized-- actually MPGH recognized official. What do you think?

[StayTrue]

We can't have like different news letters appearing official we need something organized-- official. What do you think?

I agree. @Insane

[J Miliam]

We can't have like different news letters appearing official we need something organized-- official. What do you think?

Johnny puts together the info, Ian creates the story. Co-op.

[Insane]

Johnny puts together the info, Ian creates the story. Co-op.

Sure, sounds nice but then Jonny would want to create the story or then Ian would want to put the info together or Jonny would want to do it both or Ian would it's harder then you think to Co-Op when the people don't exactly like each other.

[Ian]

Hasn't *

from a*

try saying persons involved, makes more sense.

The U.S.*

days & a flood.



I would check for more but cant see first post now.

MPGH Habit.

Anyways, those are just some small grammatical mistakes. I had no one to proofread mine. Did this under a hour. Jonhnny's was extremly hard to understand.

[Insane]

Oh! Also! @Liz I'm very good with proper grammar if we do something Official I don't mind being an editor, and I can work with InDesign I just need to download it again.

[Ian]

Johnny puts together the info, Ian creates the story. Co-op.

the only thing i didn't knew was the server being up and down. i already knew everything else. the vip hacks = it's on the main page. sjoerd, martin, getting tm = i was there. i saw why.. 2 new minions= i saw them. cod staffs gone = i saw dave's thread about it.

[Cal]

@Ian - You be my creative writer getting the gossip from the front lines
@Insane - You be the main editor getting ride of the errors
So Insane Ian Ravallo and me create the news every 2 weeeks.

[Heartview]

The whole idea of a newsletter or news is not going to work unless you have someone that either knows whats going on around the entirety of MPGH, or hire a ton of people to report in from different places in MPGH. Doubtful that more than 3 people would ever get staff for a position that isnt necessary, let alone the number that would be needed to make this 'news' actually worth reading.