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    Lightbulb 🔥Thread Design for only $1 (no gif)🔥

    Hi, I'm a guy who has recently started using photoshop and I propose thread design at a very low price. You do not expect works of art but not even unwatchable.




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    This Is Art!

    In All Seriousness:
    Please Look At Changing Your Fonts.
    Also Yellow Doesn't Really Go with White At All.
    There's A Line In The Middle Of The Picture That's Red Going From A Red Background Into A Yellow One, I Don't Get It.
    The Games Are Not Even Aligned With The Prices, And Why Are They All In One Box? Is It A Box Deal?
    The "Golden Line" At The Top Doesn't Really Do It For Me On That Background, I'm Sorry.

    I Think I've Criticized It Enough For You To Begin Working On It.
    Also: Look At Some Other Thread Designs To Get Inspiration. :^)

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    Yes, but I wrote that I am constantly growing and I'm not very good with photoshop, there was no need to crapped in this way ..

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    Quote Originally Posted by GrimmJow110 View Post
    Yes, but I wrote that I am constantly growing and I'm not very good with photoshop, there was no need to crapped in this way ..
    Excuse Me?
    I'm Trying To Give You Some Criticism To Work On.
    Sorry For Trying To Be A Bit "Joke"-ish Towards It, When You Said: "You do not expect works of art but not even unwatchable".
    Have Fun Trying To Grow Without Criticism. :^)

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    I accept the criticism, but at least send in private next time bro
    Last edited by GrimmJow110; 06-17-2018 at 02:49 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by GrimmJow110 View Post
    I accept the criticism, but at least send in private next time bro
    Ignore that guy. Seems to be on a high horse.

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    I also accept the criticism but not in this way ... I will follow your advice bro

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    Daily bump ❤

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    @ @GrimmJow110

    Not a bad design for a beginner, I mean excluding everything I can't bare to watch that alignment. Few thing you might also fix are,
    - If you are going to sell them , be sure to make the width 710 and height XX.
    - The outer box of the accounts table, if you zoom in you can clearly see a white.
    -The thread doesn't have a contact info.
    - replace the red line with the golden maybe?
    Also when you post this thread here, it is quite normal to be expected to be criticize, to bothersome to PM you for it.

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    Thanks for these suggestions, slowly improve

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    Daily Bump <3

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    Quote Originally Posted by GrimmJow110 View Post
    Daily Bump <3
    Criticism time, of course do not get offended afterall I am here to help ya...

    -The title is decent.
    - the 2 dots around "about me" shall have outer glow to match the rest.
    - about me shall be capitalized properly.
    - there are quite a lot of empty space in the text, properly align it to make it 2 lines. Also grammar mistakes.
    - For the product section, the font for the "euro tag" is different than the "thread design,avatar,signature.
    - The avatar box in the middle, has your mpgh avatar which is a gif, so it is blurry, and also the green avatar has grammar mistake.
    - The rest uses a different font and it is serif, since you started with a sans-serif font you shall finish with it.
    - The payment method shall either all be same color (preferably light color) Since paysafecard and bitcoin is black, paypal shall match it.


    Thanks for taking your time to read this, as I said at the beginning, no offense. Just trying to help ya.

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