its sad that a ex cocksucker is insulting a cocksucker on cocksucking ahahhaahaa
and if you wanted advice ask for it you asked if people liked it or not so thats what i did
advice
the white on the outside dont look good with red
black would have been a good color since the color around the render is red
you have text on the face of your render
the yellow c4d doesnt look so well on the white if you had it as black it would prob be better