First drawing

k this was very helpful, I'll take what you said into consideration.

I like the sarcasm, but seriously i doubt you will find better criticism: just by looking at it you can figure out what is wrong and what is right already on your own, what can people comment on?

Jagged lines, moderately wrong shapes, extremely barebone shadows, that's all excused for being an early drawing of yours, what are we supposed to criticize here?
At most i can say that i do indeed understand what you have drawn. If that's relevant to you.

Since this is your first drawing, I have to say that this is pretty good tbh, just keep drawing and you'll get the hang of it, it does seem a tiny bit rushed for some reason, but I guess it's somewhat still acceptable.

bad. looks misshapen and badly shaded and colored

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That's more like what I was looking for, thank you. quick update: Just because I'm new to drawing and this is my first attempt at it, doesn't mean you shouldn't change the way you critisize it, I want you to look past it as being a first attempt at just say you want. Bit like Robotkubo did.

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Ok man, I'll take what you said and somehow change it to your preference, jk but yeah thanks I will actually take what you said into consideration

I get the fact that I couldn't fix up the quality of the image but I had to get this of my phone, so yeah, but anyways thanks for advising me on that.

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Thanks for your comment this is probably the most helpful comment I've seen in quite some time so thank you for this, I don't need anymore help but I will be improving on most of these aspects that you have pointed out as well as what other people have pointed out in my next picture which will be out god knows when.

it could use some shading, but else it's a really cool style u've got going

I think it could be smoothed out.