Ali G + The Game +Flash

Hyak · 2010-02-14T07:27:06.000Z

http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/618/collabc.png put ur own names on it guis (ali and the game)

put ur own names on it guis
(ali and the game)

Sexy beasts

we sure are

[IMG]http://i612.photobucke*****m/albums/tt201/litlg555/Tag4.png[/IMG]

srry for double post but here is an improved version if ya wanna wear it

[IMG]http://i612.photobucke*****m/albums/tt201/litlg555/ColabFlash.png[/IMG]

oh shit that thing is sexy. Best collab ive seen on MPGH. Now heres my critique.

Pros
Although generally focals shouldn't be centered it works very well here.
The positioning of the splatter brushes helps with the flow of the piece.
The effects and brushing is enough to cath the eye, but not enough to overpower the piece.

Cons
Although there is lighting, it feels as if the lighting is brushed on. More fine-tuning with dodge and burn tools will help this.
I think i see a couple dabs of a c4d, the problem with these is they have a different colour scheme to the rest of the piece and they look out of place. Using a hue/sat clipping mask would fix this.
I think the colours could use a bit of saturating, the yellows look to greyish for my liking, and the "metal" needs to look more vibrant. It feels quite flat at the moment.

Ranking - High Novice/Low Moderate (keep in mind I use strict rankings from Fringe and BK)

I critiqued this hard so don't be offended by it. Its a really good piece, and you guys should be proud of it.