First Signature. Two Versions.

Please tell me which signature is better, and if they're good or not. The only differences are that I changed how bright the focus is and made V. 2 a little more yellowish on the render.
V. 1:

V. 2:


Thanks, constructive criticism is appreciated.

EDIT: First signature uploaded online.

that can't be youre 1st! what tutorial did you follow? gimmie ;P
it looks awesome dude

Not too shabby I might say

Oh, oops. First one I uploaded onto the internet. I actually can't remember what I did. I just figure out what to do while I'm at it, so it's usually different each time I do it.

so you didnt use a tutorial?

First my shiny white ass.

Huh? No. When I see others similar, I'll try making mine in the same type of style, but not exactly the same.

I accidentally typo'd. I meant it was the first signature I've ever uploaded online, on to the internet. I've got some experience in Photoshop, but I haven't made too many signatures either.

The first is better because the 2nd is too bright.