freestyle back at me nigga

yo yo, welcome to the newest era of rap terror,
Your tryin to diss me, cuz my rhymes are too clever
Niggaz will get back at me as if they straight thugs
Im dissin on a fps website, so im leaving you with raid slugs
all you tend to do is shrug, leave you on the floor with drugs
pullin the red rug, your grave just got dug, your client just got bugged
And when i say client, i mean your brain,
cuz i be controllin that shit, aint no need to say your name,
cuz im not givin you fame, cuz yo real talk, we not the same,
ill bring you to shame, the same way i brung upon reign to this rap game...

-rough rhymez (RR)

There's no mercy to spare, cause i'm commin full force/
my lyrics penetrate so *deep*, they'll have u fearin intercourse.//

By gettin rid of sicknature, I save the world from another bad artist on the charts/
you plague the world, with ya disgusting lyrical farts//

Sicknature, a lyrical disease like ebola/
sucks dick as a 'vaccine', stick it down your throat-a//

you've seen my style before, I know u fear it/
you couldn't beat me even if you purchased lyrics//

What's the point of even wastin a good rhyme/
throw Flavor Flav's 'clocks at' you cause u ain't worth my time//

lyrical premenitions, "I see pain in your future"/
ain't enough stitches in the world to sew up that suture// (surgical wounds)

One down, about 5 wanna be mc's on mpgh for me to defeat/
ya'll should quit now, you might have a better chance on "ellite"//(another fps forum)

(i kno u wasnt talkin to me but hell was in tha mood to write sumthen)

@Sicknature you suck balls lol

You're all talk, why don't you freestyle back? And I mean a freestyle on the spot, not like the first guy...

By the way, that wasn't my freestyle, it's my brothers that he made up last night, he does not have an MPGH account and doesn't plan to make one either. He was just bored and felt like writing a freestyle at that moment...

You really think that im all talk?
Ill whack you in the spine with a bat, make it hard for you to walk
I aint talkin bout cerebral palsy
Im talkin bout straight up ass kickin, im real damn ballsy
My words will get your head spinnin' you begin to lose self respect
Ill beat your ass down in real life or on the xbox kinect
My flow is real tight practically bulletproof
Im sayin that you suck and my lips they speak the truth
this is me freestylin can you believe that?
You just been scalped, your hair makin a nice fur hat
I don't really pretend to be gangster
Im a rappin white boi, rare as the last name sangster
If your cryin' right now i wouldn't be surprised
challenging me to a freestyle is real ill advised

Are you by any chance a Caucasian male? Join the club.

okay mr sig, you say mine wasnt a free but i did it right when i got dun reading your "brothers" ish...but if u want i can do another, hell if you really froggy set it up and we can audio or txt battle.....JUST SAYIN.....

Loll, my rap might've looked like it was ghetto format, cuz I was typing it out on my phone but here goes from my computer

Some say I’m crazy, some say I’m ancient/
Some love me, some hate me cuz my clique full of mental patients/
Ready to fuck you up; fill you with a crucifix/
Straight up ******s, running up on me with some lipsticks/
Hit you with a hatchet, make your lip stick/
This is the real shit, the classic, I’m drastic when I glow/
You like a vampire, I got some garlic on this flow/
I’m a leader, so you follow/
You gay, I’m straight like an arrow/
Spitting’ so fast I count to ten, my pen NOS’ed with turbo/
If we fight, we fight in a Congo jungle/
You don’t need to borrow some iron, cuz you’ll be runnin, when I be gunnin/
You a ******, can’t even walk a “straight” path/
So I’m teaching you math, cuz you would wanna know the aftermath, when I unleash this wrath/
Your elementary in this rap game, I’m teaching you ABC, making you count to Zed/
Then I leave you like a bitch on his death bed, that said he bled, and was mislead, cuz the lead I spit, lead to some bloodshed/

better then the first you you posted, but to be honest couple of your lines either dnt rhyme or are ABC flows....work on metaphors and punchlines alil more and u got it

2.5/5 mics

I don't like it to much, could use some work.
But, Considering the title, I'll battle "(

Ogkush's was the shit. I'll think about joining this

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I'm hotter then a Kim K in her Prime /
But this isn't a show, your the nigga, and this is my time /
When it comes to rhyming, I don't care what I say /
Once I start, I don't stop, I'll be freestylin all day /
I roll to MPGH and hit up Dave843 one one /
You look at this rap & you'll think im done done /
I try not to curse, for it's a sin /
But I smoke that weed that'd get me thinkin /
Yeah, them haters think I loss /
I'm not black, but I still be a boss /
Now, I see you got a lot of things to tend /
That's right & yur to busy for your boyfriend /
And i'm the hottest over here /
You read this now & don't shed a tear /
Now y'all know you lost /
Like I said I'm not black, but I still be a B0SS.

I don't rap