I'm better wtih renders.. sorta.

Da Kurlzz · 2011-07-19T02:58:02.000Z

http://www.picdrop.net/images/Far%20cry.jpg this is from a render, somehow i wouldn't know how to work with stocks. boh1 anyone got a tut on how to use stocks properly? anyways C&C. /mmz

this is from a render, somehow i wouldn't know how to work with stocks.

anyone got a tut on how to use stocks properly? anyways C&C.

Checking out tuts in here MPGH might solve ur problems.
THe C4D seems to be eating the man. Maybe put the text a bit more to the right and up.

Originally Posted by gamer4evere

Checking out tuts in here MPGH might solve ur problems.
THe C4D seems to be eating the man. Maybe put the text a bit more to the right and up.

wanted the c4d's to blend in

Mmk, i'll shift the text a little.

Originally Posted by Da Kurlzz

this is from a render, somehow i wouldn't know how to work with stocks.

anyone got a tut on how to use stocks properly? anyways C&C.

u forgot the effects bro!

The lighting could use a little tweaking. Also I would get rid of the text or try and make it better.

Originally Posted by Ryguy

The lighting could use a little tweaking. Also I would get rid of the text or try and make it better.

tweaking?

You should make the focal point stand out more, by adjusting the lighting to be more direct rather than scattered.

Originally Posted by Faux

You should make the focal point stand out more, by adjusting the lighting to be more direct rather than scattered.

around more the focal?

Originally Posted by Da Kurlzz

this is from a render, somehow i wouldn't know how to work with stocks.

anyone got a tut on how to use stocks properly? anyways C&C.

I like it, good colour effects, like those blots of brightness, and nice use of c4ds, althought possibly you could have placed it all a bit better, but the way it is now is fine. 7.5/10

I like it. Change the text and fix the lightning.

no one seemed to mention it looks monotoned. so i will.

it looks monotoned...

also imo your lighting is too intense and should be moved towards his forehead, if you study the render you will see the lighting is more intense on his forehead then it is between his body and legs.

I LOVE the slight wash out effect maybe it would look better as a dark purple or blue. just to cool it down a tad and to add a bit more colour.

the glowing effect on your light spot is unrealistic and just looks plain weird in my eyes.

one more thing, if you look carefully at the c4d's behind him (the ones his leaning on) there is a lack of depth right there in that one little spot, his leaning on the c4d's but technically there is nothing there for him to lean comfortably if you know what i mean.

anyways thats just my opinion, i do like it allot

Originally Posted by Storm

now that you mentioned it, it does looks monotoned.

so depth is another consideration in here.

But even though monotone aint that bad, iThink that the part he still needs heavy work should be the C4D.
it doesnt blend at all and its position looks like he's eating the man.. like I said previously

I'm better wtih renders.. sorta.

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