Post the original, since you said "you don't take much credit for this"
Text is horribly done, but that's with a lot of people. Don't do it unless your SURE it works with the image. Also, this doesn't look like you changed much besides colors, and a few other few aspects.
actually, i generated the tut (that comes with images) and basically started from a random point in the tutorial.. so, it looks all funny..