Too one directional, too many lightning brushes, loooks even worse when some are on lower opacity. The colours are okay, and the smudging is pretty good, just the elements I listed make the tags messy to look at.
also used this render in like '09 lololo
anyways, i'm liking the effects but other than that.. its sort of plain and looks kinda messy to me.
the top right hand was "cut off" tried to cover it up with low opacity smudging xD