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You should try going over it in like a dark shade of pen or something

Yeh, or get a better camera/light xD

This looks really good!

Thanks man! It is only my first full manga face though

you have talent mate , my frist manga faces sucked

Thanks, that was very thoughtful but I did used to draw realism styled sketches, especially with the eyes

Really nice, I suggest like said before, color the borders over with marker or something.
Maybe even scan it if you can and color it with photoshop or something.

Good start! I think the areas that need work are the eyes and the nose. I'm glad you are using the cross sections! Nice work so far!

5.5/10 The line are simply

Nice one

nice sketch

If you are new on the painting so yeah its fair enought.