Help me with this distack

Hey guys,
can anyone tell me any pointers for my rap,


[B}Your wasting my time,
im done with your shit,
im spitting these rhymes,
and splitting these hoes,
your sitting on this D,
and im going on a killing spree,
im spilling bloods,
like im part of the crips,
i dont need any scripts to kick your ass,
your acting like a fool going against me,
cause i rule this rap game like eniem,
just shut the fuck up your a damn tool,
when you see me in the streets,
you better scram,
i go raw meat when im playing these hoes,
too bad when girls pull down your pants their look of excitement froze,
just leave it to the pros,
and put your clothes back on,
my flows are insane no point in fighting,
cause im not gonna repeat,
cause im spitting these rhymes like a criminal doing crimes,
why you hating on me for being good,
probably cause im baiting like a white man in the hood,
just cause i got light skin doesn't mean i can't rap,
in fact I'm even sipping a caramel frap,
no your not tripping,
stop skipping your lines,
call me gay all you want,
its only cause i fucking slay,
and you weigh,
you now stop and pray for this madness to end,
your sadness kicks in,
no wonder your dad was dissapointed,
he has a son like you,
im all out of rhymes so i guesss im done,
i got to say,
i had fun,
now this rap is starting to decay,
so happy birthday!












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Also tell me if its good