Need some feedback

I been working on some music that i wrote. Im finally started to record it.

Here are 2 versions of this short example of what i want the full version to be.

Example 1

Example 2 weird version

After listening to this you might say wtf.

let me know what you think so i can produce the full version soon.

I couldn't post on youtube because it is acting funny for me.

wtf .

That...... Upsets me................ Its all classic guitar.

well, i listened to it, and it may need some work but it sounds pretty good actually. The first one that is. the second one is just shit.

yea i was high when i did the 2nd one.

ahaha that explains it. ill listen to it later when im high enough and see what i think of it.

The second one is played backwards btw.

yeh i could hear that

I like all sorts of music.
I just got me a sound room set up.
I got a buddy of mine comin out of florida to jam.
He is going to help me add the metal verse to the first example for the full cut.

Wow !!!! You're awesome....even better than Eminem

I agree...

Why was he unbanned anyway