Here are things you need to improve on:
-Music and Sound FX
-More Sony Vegas editing and intros, other than BraProductions action intro tutorial
-Remove the Soft Contrast and edit your clips colors with Color Corrector
-Don't show shots that you missed and even slow down the missed ones, it's embarrassing
-Try not to use the transitions.
-Gear away from mods and hacks in your montage
-Try to be more versatile, have more than Junk Flea.
Other than that, your Sony Vegas skills can have lots of work.
Trust me, it's not hard at all.
I taught myself how to use it in like 1 year, and i still haven't mastered it.
and in 1 month, i taught my friend the tricks and effects i learned.
It took me long to learn by myself, but took my friend less than 1 month to learn with my teachings.
6/10:
Lack of music
Un-needed clips
Over-Edited
strict Junk Flea
mods in game.
nice try though ;D