My first intro ever made

Yo guys xD
just finished my shitty intro in sony vegas.
it's for teh first time lol.
whatchya think?

If this is your first you did a fantastic job. I dont use sony vegas to make intros anymore AdobeFX all the way and SVP to render. Msg me if you need some help 8.5/10

ya mate it was my first intro ever made.
i always wanted to know how to make a ring in after effects. and what's svp?