Alienware (Not really) camo. First camo

Hey guys, after making the ump skin I thought I'd give a camo a go.

Reference picture:


I liked the texture in the pc so tried to replicate that... kind of

Outcome:






I tried to combine wires with the kinda of sludgy green shapes.... Didn't come out how I wanted it to and I only had half an hour to try. If anyone want's me to I can upload the camo file but I'm really looking for some opinions/advice on what I should try tomorrow night to make this camo work, as im not liking it how it is atm.

Thanks

Looks like a neat woodland camo.