Nice effect you have there, it just needs something else... Sound! Yes that is it; it seems to need some sound for when the door things open and close! Also I don't think that the text fits very well with it, not sure what else you could try though, keep it up!
umm...how did u get mpgh to except an animated avy?
wat u mean, i just used imageready to make it, then clicked SAVE OPTIMISED AS then a .gif file, then saved it ... easy as pie. dont forget, host it online somewhere like photobucke*****m , not upload from comp.
ps--- sound?!?!?!?! wat the fuggle how u do sounds?