TuneTrippin' - I need input.

Ok, well I have this communication technology class right, and we have to do a 10 page cover-to-cover magazine. What I'd like from you, is to give me constructive criticism on my magazine cover. What can I make better, etc. I've been told it's "simple, but sexy" and that it looks "professional."

Anyways, here it is:

Oh, and by the way, thanks to Gourav for helping me come up with the clever name.

Wait shit. I didn't see the tool thing. I vote the first one.

Hell yea, This catches my eye.... This is something that i would read.

i will scan through it
i would say worth a look =/

There, I updated it. The barcode is smaller, the title is higher than it was before and Lupe's head appears above the text now.

Good job, And by the way. Do you have to write articales in it? or just make a cover?

When I finish in ~2 weeks there will be articles + full page print ads inside. I'll see if I can upload the PDF for you guys.

Yea, Cause i'm intersted in reading it. Tell me what grade you get on it. o.O

Lowest mark I've gotten was an 84 in that class, everything else is 98-100% If I keep it up at this pace, I could probably get 100% on this.

Yea, And also with us telling you want to fix and all that stuff, You MUST get a good grade.

Well, I still haven't seen anyone tell me what I can fix. :P
Stupid ass ILovePie21 thinks he can do a better job in paint. I beg to differ.

Hmm, Nah you are good in paint, But also, I have never seen ilovepie do something in paint. But you got my vote.

PS: The reason nobody is telling you what to fix is because there is really nothing to fix. It's good.