i like but the colourikng overlay is too heavy, lighten render, also the render blends WAY too much for that sig........ maybe you should use a different render for that style of render duplication. it looks to overcoloured and contrasted, the lighting is destructive to the blending and looks weird...... but thats thw bad bit, and 30mins isnt that bad, that means u looked for something or u changed sumting, i always do dat. never perfect first time, make smaller and less comp;licated, it look good... ps- change text, doesnt mix in. but good job onb it, for a second sig its pretty amazing. only a 5/10 for it tho. sry