ehh..that ''red thing''..was meant to be her tears.. like she's crying or smffin..well i think i didnt execute it well :/
the text really isnt workin tbh its too blurred in places aswell, makin it seem a bit lq other than that maybe a little over whored but gj
its nice, delete the red thing, or make it another colour and as scarecrow said: make the text less blurry.