Am I good?
Am I good?
Well hello there name is GiftedPotato I got some beat and I got some flow. I spit some at day some at night. words come out gives people chills and fright. cause they know that im right round the corner. ready to bust your brain make ur sight blurred. Be sure not to mess with me cause Ima pop some toxic in ur drink while u aint lookin. Watch u beg for mercy as u constipatin. Be the new kid on the block while u down suckin cock.
My first time spitting rap. I know it prolly sucks. any suggestions to make me better?
My first time spitting rap. I know it prolly sucks. any suggestions to make me better?
Originally Posted by GiftedPotato
Well hello there name is GiftedPotato I got some beat and I got some flow. I spit some at day some at night. words come out gives people chills and fright. cause they know that im right round the corner. ready to bust your brain make ur sight blurred. Be sure not to mess with me cause Ima pop some toxic in ur drink while u aint lookin. Watch u beg for mercy as u constipatin. Be the new kid on the block while u down suckin cock.
My first time spitting rap. I know it prolly sucks. any suggestions to make me better?
My first time spitting rap. I know it prolly sucks. any suggestions to make me better?
It's... Not TO bad... A few suggestions, Make it longer and make it continue to rhyme like, "Nigga watch me spit, Interrupt me you get hit, Yeah bitch, You best sit, You may as well quit." And just keep going with it as long as you can until you can't think of anymore words that rhyme or until it gets to the point where you think you should stop and move on to rhyming another word. 
