He's mine.
He's mine.
My knees tremble, my heart pounds,
My lungs work at a faster pace, My arms bound.
I look into his eyes, I see the man he truly is,
No need to hide, no need to lie, just bliss.
He draws nearer, My mouth dries up,
He is mine, forever and I won't give him up.
He holds me tight, his embrace as warm as a cozy fireplace,
His eyes never leaving mine, and so our hearts give chase.
Every sensation, is a magical fascination,
Love at its purest state, his hand softly caresses my face,
He is my savior, there's no bad memory he can't erase.
I cannot imagine this world without him, it would be a half life
He is simply the only cure to my every strife
For he is my husband, and I his wife.
My lungs work at a faster pace, My arms bound.
I look into his eyes, I see the man he truly is,
No need to hide, no need to lie, just bliss.
He draws nearer, My mouth dries up,
He is mine, forever and I won't give him up.
He holds me tight, his embrace as warm as a cozy fireplace,
His eyes never leaving mine, and so our hearts give chase.
Every sensation, is a magical fascination,
Love at its purest state, his hand softly caresses my face,
He is my savior, there's no bad memory he can't erase.
I cannot imagine this world without him, it would be a half life
He is simply the only cure to my every strife
For he is my husband, and I his wife.
Amazing poetry Liz 
Hope to see more soon.
Hope to see more soon.Thank you 
That's a pretty damn good poem. 
The meaning is really good. The way you connected the dots was fascinating.
The meaning is really good. The way you connected the dots was fascinating.
Thanks
@Alessandro10 try reading it in a different way.
@Liz honestly make more I write poetry and stories whenever I'm bored or just feel like writing and pour my heart into my poetry and just write random Books :3 You're really good Liz :P Stick to it. I hope to see more soon. 
@Liz honestly make more
I write poetry and stories whenever I'm bored or just feel like writing and pour my heart into my poetry and just write random Books :3 You're really good Liz :P Stick to it. I hope to see more soon. there's a couple pages here of my stuff, feel free to browse through them.
I shall as long as you read mine when I posted them 
Amazing :P I lob u <3
Do you write for a hobby?
Originally Posted by Jetfire.
Do you write for a hobby?
Originally Posted by Liz
only when I get inspired to do so...
Thank you.
Originally Posted by Liz
only when I get inspired to do so...
Reading this was kinda weird to be honest. It's straying away from your style, which in a sense is actually a good thing I suppose. Not often do you write so bluntly, and especially not with AABB rhyming schemes. Also, it was hopeful... and warm. That's definitely a change of pace 
I'll end this reply simply with what I usually tell you: I STILL WANT MORE
I'll end this reply simply with what I usually tell you: I STILL WANT MORE
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