He's mine.

Originally Posted by Hero

Who, or what inspires you?

My hubby mostly, life, family, situations, etc.

Originally Posted by Scruffy

Reading this was kinda weird to be honest. It's straying away from your style, which in a sense is actually a good thing I suppose. Not often do you write so bluntly, and especially not with AABB rhyming schemes. Also, it was hopeful... and warm. That's definitely a change of pace

I'll end this reply simply with what I usually tell you: I STILL WANT MORE

Thanks CT, I miss your awesome reviews.

wanna gib me a lesson on poetry
I got poetry up next month in class
/need halp

Write honest, seek a muse or inspiration, Don't worry so much about rhyme schemes, and more about saying what you want to say, be eloquent, mask your true words if necessary, but you can also simply hide the meaning under similes or anecdotes. Depends really on your assignment, I follow no true method or format, I just write to write.

Originally Posted by Liz

Thanks CT, I miss your awesome reviews.

Maybe if you still talked to me you'd see 'em more.

Thought you were in college, and I've been avoiding conversations, bare minimum if at all possible.

Originally Posted by Liz

Thought you were in college, and I've been avoiding conversations, bare minimum if at all possible.

I am, and why's that?

Derp, Idk. just don't feel chatty, or particularly sharing.

Always making good poetry

Originally Posted by Liz

Derp, Idk. just don't feel chatty, or particularly sharing.

suit yourself

I'm always feeling chatty

Thank you

Originally Posted by Scruffy

suit yourself
I'm always feeling chatty

nothing personal, is just that i don't feel like answering questions like, how are you, whats going on, etc. one of my moods i guess. which in turn makes me want to write, sooo lol

do yo thang wiz

Lol I was stalking your profile from SID's profile and I saw this and I was like lets check it out. Really Nice poem =). It even touched a troll heart.

Wow that was boss Liz
good job.
I read it to my sister.
She's like 19 and he was like DAUM.

It's very nice Liz. I was never really a poetry fan, But your poetry never ceases to amaze me. You have a great way of words.

@Liz this is really great. You used antithesis and litotes very well

I'll post some of my recent work later

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