New to This....

OK for your first

Heres a couple of suggestions:
Try and find some better fonts
Get some new brushes and brush around the render to give it some more style
and add in some effects.
Then it will look pretty good ;D

Can't wait to see what you'll do in the future.

Yeah you improved a lot from 1st -> second.

Yeah i know it would help. Do you know any good font packages, brush packages or C4D packages?

Well, you can always check the resources thread

It has loads of good brush packs, c4d packs, and links to font sites.
And font packs.
http://www.mpgh.net/forum/8-graphics...resources.html

Thanks this will help .

No problem.
Thanks for the thanks.
Good sig for you second attempt.

Thank god for this site's resource packs, eh?

hurray you made I smaller I was gonna suggest 400*150 but you figured out a good size for second gj

its a ******.
1/10

you cant give good comments, can u?

You're going on thread looking for oppurtunities to make an argument arent you?

Btw i liked the sig, only turn off is its size >.< lol