Business Card Pre-Final

Heres a business card I put together. Maybe you guys can give me some feedbacks on what I can improve on it before I present it to my client.



theres also this one but my client said it wasnt what he had in mind. Personaly I agree with him lol, it kinda looks like a wedding or funeral home business card:

i personally like the chocolate one,

but then again the first ones are a nice touch but maybe you shuold incorporate more about the business itself, such as owners or even subtle pictures or engrave its logo on the card. i know you have the main logo, but engrave one up the top left or something

k, thnx for the input, ill see what it looks like and post it after

its too... simple. needs more oomph. like add something to catch someones eye like a pattern or a border or something. try that out.

The red one is my style. Personally I would have made something around the lines of that card.

i like the first 2, their simple and sophisticated looking, not too much pizazz because this is the buisness world we're lookin at =P

The red care is sexy, could use more contact info in it though. :X

I don't really like the gray one under it or the funeral home one.

I don't think it needs more "oomph", more and more effects take the beauty from a clean simple image.

Nice cards, I like the red.

IMO, the first one looks like a billboard, the second one looks like a funeral card.

Try something more traditional (if not the colors, at least the format).
That's just my opinion, though the first one really caught my eye, but I don't like it that much after further inspection (due to it resembling a billboard).

Just my opinion.