Song I wrote. need feedback

ffs. It tak3s forever on le ps3 to go thru everyghing. J u s t say it again! Please.

... I used a microphone...

Any program s?

GOOGLE MUTHACRAPPIN PIECE OF CAKE

Your just one big ****** ass muncher cocksucking ball of shit you fuckin jew dogayda.

wauw.
thats a mouth full....

OF HORSE SPERM.


And by the way, I'm not a jew.
I dont like cocks
I'm not big
I'm not made out of shit
And i dont even know what a dogayda is. prolly some nigga shit.

eeverything else i am.. that is just a ******
And no, Not the homo lovin type.

horse sperm....jackass iloved that movie.

So your a terd eating ballsack munching scrotum licker?

nooohoo
Just the fagget part. hmmk?



Oh and unkown
I havent even seen it lol
So i'm just typing random crap here

flaming ******s...

So is the "warp" intentional?

Because it really sounds like crap. Leave the distortion to electrics. D:

The song itself isn't too bad.

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