fist stock work

I like it.
You're improving and it shows.
The effects you used are kind of boring though, try branching out by using clipping masks or some effect C4D's.
The text is really small, but it doesn't take away from your focal.
8/10

i removed the text, so yeah

You should try downloading a font pack.

yeah, i think ill do that

There should be one in a sticky.