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Comments and Criticism appreciated.

The shadows look too much like pastel work to me, id smudge them out a little more so there's less of a grain (don't smudge the render though, it looks good to me), good choice of text, nice coloring and concept..
8.6/10
Nice job unknown!

Originally Posted by Leonzfun

Cheers man.

Yeah the shadows were annoying me a lot, with positioning etc. I'll try smuding them out if i get the time to later.

Cheers for the C/C

Not bad, lighting is a bit off.
Text could use some fixing up.
Dark.

Still not bad.

Originally Posted by Ryguy

Not bad, lighting is a bit off.
Text could use some fixing up.
Dark.

Still not bad.

Cheers, yeah the text needs working on, imo needs to be a bit darker, and right now trying to work on my lighting a bit, need to practice with it.

Needs to go left to right.

very nice 8.9/10

Originally Posted by Ryguy

Needs to go left to right.

Yeah, i know, but that would of have took a lot more time to do, and time sucks :/

And thanks Liz

lighting is a little off, but not too much to where it ruins the picture, also I kinda like the shadows

maybe not so much behind the spartan though...you did nicely with the text, went well with the flow of your focal, all in all very nice product.

8.9/10.

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