I think it needs more lightning. Use some stock of lightning or something. Because the render looks sick with that lightning so it'd be cool with even more.
9/10
Lolz darth tbh no topaz on this one,
here is my sad but somewhat decent attempt at more lightning, not much but i got rid of bad splats
[IMG]http://i385.photobucke*****m/albums/oo292/Hammical/inFamousSIGcopy-2.png[/IMG]