1st)
Work little on the board,put more brushes in , put some blending try play with the effects or look for a tut 8/10 sorry.
2nd)this is better then the 1st everything is nice but the text is not so good try work on it more 9.5/10
i know i was making second b4 i went to school my school bus arrived so i had to put text quickly lol i wasnt gonna be able to continue after school cuz i had to go out i just rushed it lol.