Lil Freestyle

I am sorry for the language. I am black and normally don't use it, but it helps me flow.

Three zero zero four, set the pace
Im not playin with ya lil niggas, dis a race
Yu right here feeling pumped?
Well ima have you trailing me like im Forrest Gump.
Glock 40 make ya bitch ass niggas jump
Whatcha scared fo? Like yu never seen a gun?
So you wanna fuck with the best?
Naw, cuz ima leave a 40 in ya chest
Nigga stepped on my shoes
So i put bullets on his ass, like my Levi Blues.
M P G H, where I make my first stand
Looka there, looka there, I got a whole band

Just a LITTLE feedback would be nice....

You shot a man's ass because he stepped on your shoes? Anger management?

Its aight, lemme try.

i always spit acid, leave the track cooked
got agencies callin me, my tour is already booked
im just a no-name white boy, spittin crack at the lunch table
niggas walkin by me wonderin "damn, why doesnt he have a label?"
well my style is too malicious and my flow too delicious
cant pass my rhymes up, ill leave yo ass superstitious
and bitches, dont every try to get on my swag
you aint foolin me, thats no real gucci tag
my flow is never ending, i can go on for days
i challenge to find someone with slightly hotter sprays

I love this line, So you wanna fuck with the best?
Naw, cuz ima leave a 40 in ya chest

thats rlly good..

heres myn :P

Yo check this out.. im gonna rhyme while i spit this out.
I chill on the block and i got my glock, At my side.
while me and all my brotha's stride.. With american pride.
We all gangsta's, Hustla's.. just like the five Oh will bust yuh.
Thats why I rhyme. to defeat the purpose of lyin. So when
you read these lyrics, you'll be spittin out The led i put in ya fo
bitchin at the the bed...

watch as i own all of you

dont do crack
that shit is whack
never do a drug named after ya ass

It was he jacked my shoes. I changed it.