To simple, text should be smaller, and more effects need to be added Overall your improving 6.5/10 You've done better
soryy i dont like the colours much. You gotta work on your focal and text, your getting better though. Keep at it.
Render seems choppy and the text is too big. Bg is decent but you couldve developed it more. It's a decent tag. :3
Originally Posted by Liz you are one harsh ape... YOU MUST BE HARSH TO BE THE ALPHA APE! p.s.- if u rip once, ur always a ripper. :P