Rapping Again

Criticize, reply, do what you want
A more serious rap this time instead of humorous :/

I was born in the Philippines facing a life of death
Ive been a child soulja ever since my mama gave me breath
Ive built my kingdom from the ground up
And now i drink the finest booze from my golden cup
Sitting on my throne at the top of the world
Drinking so much everything is starting to swirl
But i don't care, I'm enjoying this
I'm on cloud nine, a state of perpetual bliss
Everything is perfect, do you know how that feels?
Its like I'm dreaming all this seems so unreal
Pinch me i wonder if I'm sleeping
Oh but wait conciseness is slowly creeping

O.o I think i did ok

Ill nigga...