Obsession
Obsession
Have you ever loved from a distance...
Wishing they will be yours, even if for just a moment of brilliance.
Someone else makes him smile
Someone else makes his life worthwhile
How can I watch and not become hostile.
Does he even know I care,
Does he even know he's the reason of my despair.
That I look, and breathe every word he writes & no one compares.
But even as he loves another, I feel every sensation,
It runs deeper in my veins that my own circulation,
You my love, are my obsession.
Wishing they will be yours, even if for just a moment of brilliance.
Someone else makes him smile
Someone else makes his life worthwhile
How can I watch and not become hostile.
Does he even know I care,
Does he even know he's the reason of my despair.
That I look, and breathe every word he writes & no one compares.
But even as he loves another, I feel every sensation,
It runs deeper in my veins that my own circulation,
You my love, are my obsession.
wow...
That deserves a thanks...
That deserves a thanks...
Very nice Liz 
.
Keep it up
.Keep it up
Another Great Piece by LIZ
Gud onya Girl
U should think bout sending in yo poems 2 a newspaper or sumtin
Gud onya Girl
U should think bout sending in yo poems 2 a newspaper or sumtin
I'm actually thinking of someday publishing them..
Originally Posted by Liz
I'm actually thinking of someday publishing them..
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Keep it up Liz.
sux.
im jk
its gewd
im jk
its gewd
I usually hate subjective poetry, but that was pretty good.
wow ur gud
Wow rlly nice Liz Good work *Tums Up*
Good shiiittt girllll
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