New Style try

[IMG]http://i269.photobucke*****m/albums/jj51/Espada242/ownage.png[/IMG]

V2
[IMG]http://i269.photobucke*****m/albums/jj51/Espada242/ownage1.png[/IMG]

CnC
and don't bash for the anime please
it was a request on other forums T-T

BUMP
rate it damit D:<

The background can use a bit of work, The render is set to an opacity lower than 50% I can see the BG C4D,The render can also be placed a little better, The Text is alright,
Good job 7/10

no, the render is on 100% Normal
what your seeing in on it is mostly
light fractal brushing
and 2 splatter clippings :/

Honestly, I'm not liking how you can see through the render a bit or whatever those weird lines are. It was a good idea to add some color but maybe you should've tried something else on it.

I think the text shouldn't have three lines of text underneath but one instead.

My favorite part is the color choices. They all go so well together. Good job on that.

I agree with Whisper 100 %

made a V2
T-T

I really like the outcome for V2.

^_^

a little better you can still notice the signs btw don't take this as an offence I am just givving you a critique

FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-
just accept its only my fractal brushing and clipping masks Q_Q

ok dude chill out I said its not meant to be an offence or anything

its there for a reason its not an error. its just how it came out looks like its wrong in a way.
8/10