you should take the glow off the render and text
then itd be allot better
8/10
The left side overpowers the right side a bit. All the light and brightness is on the left of him while the right is pretty simple. I wouldn't say to add to much more. Just something small and nice on the right.
I Lol'd @ The text.
Nice man, you've improved alot lately. I like your john lennon signature the most, but this one is good aswell. I'd remove that glow though
Haha.