Start putting stocks in make instead of just a plain background. the right side is looking promising but unfinished.
yah, i ahd nother to put there
i ahd a huuge delay...i done like 3 text tuts hah, but failed then all, its crap...colour over the render sucks =/...
Energy cna you give me a direct good stocks tut, i cant do stocks....
The fractals/c4d is way to, week and faint.
i didnt use any C4D's...just a C4D looking brush...
Timeshift was such a shitty game, they got so many renders tho.
In my eyes, your left half is complete emptiness. Bring in your render and effects more towards the center and add some more things around him.
the focal doesn't look good on the far right tbh. try to have different backgrounds. This one is repetitive and boring sorry.