First Abstract

Preety gud for ya First Abstract

Ehh 9/10

Gud colour choice n all.

Just try 2 fix the text a bit

mm I know the Tut you used for that.
Lost it now, But I've used it.

MMD - Seriously, if you're gonna post here, you gotta take the comments and what they think of it. The main text is not that good + the sub text - the color doesn't flow with it. You're getting better, just work on your attitude.

I think you should take out the lens flare and seriously reconsider the text. The background is empty looks unfinished and plain. I mean it looks ok but taking into consideration you followed the tut to the letter it means you didn't really do anything on it yourself. When following tuts, use something different but follow the techniques used. What i'd do man is do it again and i'll work you through it over Teamviewer, i no it's hard to take the critism but better now then later. So drop me a PM if you want to do that.


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Energy

It looks really cool,

Text needs improvement.

i see tut on this abstract picture too but i never make it work cause i dont have PS in english and i am not that great in english

i like it good colors.