its looks nice but the focal is to hard to see.
i tried for more attention on the explosion
but yeah, had a hard time trying to keep him bright
Focal problems. Concentrate towards the render/stock more, instead of the explosion stuffs going on back there.
The trooper isn't too clear and could've been done a bit better.
The one with the text is better btw.
Render isn't very noticable but very nice. Definately your best.
I don't like the fact it's one colour.