First sprite.

So yh...This is my first sprite , like the title says...

I think this came out bettah

If you dun see the 4px border then imageshack fucked it up again..

sorry 7/10 i dont like background maybe a fractal or a C4D around the render would be nice...

ITS NOT IMAGESHACK!!!!!!!!!!!!
It's your eyes. I can see it, it's a white border against a very light grey bg...

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Good for your first, text is positioned wrong imo, needs more colors and work on blending.

Added V2 .

Eh it's alright for your first one, I guess you could say.

I like the effect around the sprite.

Originally Posted by mexicano007

I like the effect around the sprite.

OKaay.

Any C&C?

Second is much better, but I'm not too kean on the background for some reason..Just looks a bit too plain. Lightning effects are good, text probaly needs to be positioned closer or just remove it.

Very good for your first though. :]

Originally Posted by V I R U S

The BG is plain yh...
Im glad you liked the effects

hello mpgh,
I am back for 1 hour

can't make signature but on weekend probably i back

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give it 8/10 nice sig but work on it more

I like V2 better, V1 was 2 bright 4 me...

Uhh i personally dont like the background

i would suggest using the pen-tool and make a energy path and find a nice fractal/C4D and create a clipping mask

Originally Posted by Gesus

I like V2 better, V1 was 2 bright 4 me...

Uhh i personally dont like the background

i would suggest using the pen-tool and make a energy path and find a nice fractal/C4D and create a clipping mask

Nice Idea

c, I am a Smrt C00kie

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